Switzerland is very famous of chocolate.
Philippe Suchard, a Swiss Chocolatier( 9 Oct 1797 - 14 January 1884)
This is the detail of his life :
When he was young 
, he worked as an apprentice in his brother Bern's company
. He started his business in 1826 
by opening the first factory “Chocolate Suchard” in Serrieres. Then, he got his first order from King Prussia in 1842
. After that, he won prizes 
in 1851 and 1855. Then, he opened another factory in other country in 1880 exactly in Germany
. He became the largest chocolate producer in 19th century
. After he died in 1884, his daughter, Eugenie, took over his factory 
. Right now, The factory has become Kraft foods 
groups.
If you want to eat Swiss chocolate, you do not have to go to Switzerland because you can find it in stores in The USA 
, just buy a bar of “Toblerone” 
chocolate. Or if, you have a chance go to Switzerland 
for vacation or honeymoon, do not forget or you have to buy handicraft for your lovely family a dozen pieces or a bar of "Milka" 
chocolate.
Ribka,
ReplyDeleteI love your creativity! What a great way to tell the story of someone's life. Also, thanks for including the video.
I have a few suggestions for you:
Don't use "he" in your first sentence when you are introducing your famous person because we don't know who "he" is. Use his first name instead.
he worked as an apprentice in his brother Bern's company. (better way to word the sentence)
He started opening = He started
in serrieres (is this a place? if so, capitalize)
in 18 century (AA and 18 = 18th)
took his factory = took over his factory
you do not have to go Switzerland (AA)
Toblerone chocolate. Or, if...
go to the Switzerland (OA)
do not forget to buy your lovely family a dozen pieces or a bar of "Milka" chocolate.
Great job!